absolutely amazing, but at one point i couldn't pick up a thing i needed to progress and i was stuck for about 10 minutes but stuff like that happens and you just gotta reload the game. all around 9.5/10 keep it up and i want to see what happens next :
The game was really intreasting i hate playing scary games but since trying to grow and play scary games i enjoyed it so i would like to see more games and good luck it was a amazing expericene.
I really liked this game. Enjoyed the atmosphere and the story that slowly took place. Suggestion: you don't need to explain everything. You don't need to two bits of text that explain the time slips or anything like that, it takes away from the narrative and pulls the curtain back where it shouldn't. (That is, show don't tell.) I appreciate that you don't use cheap jumpscares and that you slowly show who is who in this game.
I really like what You were going for in this one, and I want to see a full release in the near future. This Game had me on edge for most part of it's duration. Suggestion I'd like to give you is, I want to see some form of "narration" on the Story, reading long notes can be tedious, kinda kills the pacing of the game for Me.
Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here:
Advantages:
1. The graphics. I mean it's so cool that the character has a shadow, we can see her hands holding a flashlight, the rooms are so detailed dand interesting to look at. The game looks very fine.
2. The story, lore. I like that there is something more to the game than just a ghost story. I'm really interested in what will in the full version be.
3. I like that you introduced different concepts in this version of the game. The player not just walks from one room to another. There are some looptie-loops, story-telling, environment-changing. Great!
Disadvantages:
1. I would like to see an option of reading texts in a different more readable overlay. The text is fine but there are lots of small prints that get hard to read after a while.
2. That's a bit strange that we have a flashlight right off the bat, but our phone has to be found.
3. You have working shadows but no working mirrors. They kinda reflect stuff but not if you are looking right into them. That would be nice to be able to see your reflection. Though, maybe it goes against some lore or the concept. Then no changes are needed.
Overall:
I enjoyed this game a lot! The disadvantages are kinda neat-picky but I just wanted to point out some things from which the game could possibly benefit. This was lots of fun! Great 5/5 experience!
Gotta say what this game lacks in jump scares, more than makes up for in atmosphere. The story of this game is very intriguing, and it's very well designed! Enjoyed this game very much and I look forward to seeing more!
So I absolutely loved this game. Had some great scares and honestly made me uneasy at times. Well worth the play. Ill link my letsplay If you or anyone is interested. Small Island Woes is also apart of the letsplay so check that one out if you havent seen it! Thanks!
A part of it got cut off because it kinda was lagging at a certain part, but everything else is pretty smooth and good. Very good, very scary. Really enjoyed the jump scares. I can't wait for the full release of the game! Loved it!
This game was sick! It was able to keep me on my toes the throughout entire game. Few things tho, during the scene with blue doors and a cabinet, I can't move sideways into the cabinet. I think most player will look at what's on the cabinet and think that they could sidestep to line themselves up. And when the "No Fate" door opened, I kinda have to touch it the second time for it to work. Other than that, the game was amazing with many good scares. Can't wait to play more.
[just gonna shamelessly plug my vid there...( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ]
Hey thank you! The cabinet thing is a glitch that was messing up the whole level, already patched it! The No fate door is not a bug, it supposed to trick you into thinking nothing will happen.
I love seeing every time you update this game! You put in so much work! The only few things I noticed were the camera being able to move diagonally feels weird to me, the press E to read button sometimes sticks, toward the end of the game it seems that you have to read each note twice in order to start the next part of the level, and the first note in the home about the family has a typo where you call the son a girl once. Other than that I truly love your work and I can't wait to see how it all turns out in the end! Also, is there a difference between donating to you through Kickstarter or Patreon?
Hey thank you so much for your feedback, really appreciate it. Woa I never noticed the typo, patching it right now... Yeah the press "E" to read button I already patched, you were probably playing the previous version. The reading the notes twice I had been trying to fix but I think I finally found the solution. The real difference between patreon and kickstarter is patreon is a montly payment while kickstarter is only one-time payment.
No problem! Happy to help any way I can your work is really good! Hope the note thing doesn't cause you too much trouble lol. Okay, thanks for clearing that up for me! :)
I play a lot of indie horror games, both long and short form and to date, this one has been the scariest with the story being one of the most intriguing. I look forward to the full release of this game!
This game was a lot of fun, and also my first jump into serious horror on my channel! I congratulate the developers for creating something with so much atmosphere! Check out my playthrough!
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This genuinely made me jump! I really enjoyed the off putting sounds in this!
Hey thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)
A very good game scared me XD i had to restart few times game in order to pick up newspaper at end of the game. Keep up the good work ^^
Thank you! I'm looking into that bug, cause other people get it too.
Thank you, otherwise i loved it :)
absolutely amazing, but at one point i couldn't pick up a thing i needed to progress and i was stuck for about 10 minutes but stuff like that happens and you just gotta reload the game. all around 9.5/10 keep it up and i want to see what happens next :
Thank you :). May I ask, what part you got stuck?
That was really really good, i legit enjoyed that so much and it scared the F outta me, keep up the good work, dev.. really fun experience ^^
hey thanks man :)
The game was really intreasting i hate playing scary games but since trying to grow and play scary games i enjoyed it so i would like to see more games and good luck it was a amazing expericene.
Thank you :)
I really liked this game. Enjoyed the atmosphere and the story that slowly took place. Suggestion: you don't need to explain everything. You don't need to two bits of text that explain the time slips or anything like that, it takes away from the narrative and pulls the curtain back where it shouldn't. (That is, show don't tell.) I appreciate that you don't use cheap jumpscares and that you slowly show who is who in this game.
Thank you! Yeah I thought about removing those texts, maybe I'll make them shorter and more suggestive.
I really like what You were going for in this one, and I want to see a full release in the near future. This Game had me on edge for most part of it's duration. Suggestion I'd like to give you is, I want to see some form of "narration" on the Story, reading long notes can be tedious, kinda kills the pacing of the game for Me.
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)
I love this game, scared me to death, good job!
Thank you :)
This game is kinda creepy, i hope you make more games
Thanks :)
This game nearly gave me a heart attack! I loved it and can’t wait to play more! Check out my gameplay!
Thank you!
Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here:
Advantages:
1. The graphics. I mean it's so cool that the character has a shadow, we can see her hands holding a flashlight, the rooms are so detailed dand interesting to look at. The game looks very fine.
2. The story, lore. I like that there is something more to the game than just a ghost story. I'm really interested in what will in the full version be.
3. I like that you introduced different concepts in this version of the game. The player not just walks from one room to another. There are some looptie-loops, story-telling, environment-changing. Great!
Disadvantages:
1. I would like to see an option of reading texts in a different more readable overlay. The text is fine but there are lots of small prints that get hard to read after a while.
2. That's a bit strange that we have a flashlight right off the bat, but our phone has to be found.
3. You have working shadows but no working mirrors. They kinda reflect stuff but not if you are looking right into them. That would be nice to be able to see your reflection. Though, maybe it goes against some lore or the concept. Then no changes are needed.
Overall:
I enjoyed this game a lot! The disadvantages are kinda neat-picky but I just wanted to point out some things from which the game could possibly benefit. This was lots of fun! Great 5/5 experience!
Hope my feedback was useful!
Hey thank you for the feedback, appreciate it :)
I must say, I love the atmosphere and the scares were just too good, Keep it up you guys!
Surprisingly impressive. Looking forward to a fully finished version. Would do well on Steam!
This game was really fun and I can’t wait for the full release! Have fun watching my freak out reactions here XD
(P.s. my face cam is back as of this video!)
Hey man i loved this game! made a vid for each update! keep it coming
I really enjoyed this game
Wow was this a surprising little gem of a game! I hadn't previously heard of the game but man was I impressed. Really great job, dev!
Hey thank you!
last time I play this it was like last year so I played it again.
So I absolutely loved this game. Had some great scares and honestly made me uneasy at times. Well worth the play. Ill link my letsplay If you or anyone is interested. Small Island Woes is also apart of the letsplay so check that one out if you havent seen it! Thanks!
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it
Adorei, jogava este jogo na minha infancia. Obrigado por colocar ele de graça (1 real é muito caro).
A part of it got cut off because it kinda was lagging at a certain part, but everything else is pretty smooth and good. Very good, very scary. Really enjoyed the jump scares. I can't wait for the full release of the game! Loved it!
-Smooches, XxMelodicaxX
There is a bug at the very end, you cant pick up the newspaper about dad D:
Nice game though !
Tortured my boyfriend so I really appreciate it !!
Thank you! How long ago did you download the game? It might be an older version that had that bug.
This game was sick! It was able to keep me on my toes the throughout entire game. Few things tho, during the scene with blue doors and a cabinet, I can't move sideways into the cabinet. I think most player will look at what's on the cabinet and think that they could sidestep to line themselves up. And when the "No Fate" door opened, I kinda have to touch it the second time for it to work. Other than that, the game was amazing with many good scares. Can't wait to play more.
[just gonna shamelessly plug my vid there...( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ]
Hey thank you! The cabinet thing is a glitch that was messing up the whole level, already patched it! The No fate door is not a bug, it supposed to trick you into thinking nothing will happen.
I see, thanks for making such an awesome game!
Hey thank you for playing and for supporting the game :)
I love seeing every time you update this game! You put in so much work! The only few things I noticed were the camera being able to move diagonally feels weird to me, the press E to read button sometimes sticks, toward the end of the game it seems that you have to read each note twice in order to start the next part of the level, and the first note in the home about the family has a typo where you call the son a girl once. Other than that I truly love your work and I can't wait to see how it all turns out in the end! Also, is there a difference between donating to you through Kickstarter or Patreon?
Hey thank you so much for your feedback, really appreciate it. Woa I never noticed the typo, patching it right now... Yeah the press "E" to read button I already patched, you were probably playing the previous version. The reading the notes twice I had been trying to fix but I think I finally found the solution. The real difference between patreon and kickstarter is patreon is a montly payment while kickstarter is only one-time payment.
No problem! Happy to help any way I can your work is really good! Hope the note thing doesn't cause you too much trouble lol. Okay, thanks for clearing that up for me! :)
Already patched it, the note thing shouldn't be causing trouble 👍
Sweet! That's awesome news! Congratz! Can't wait till the next major update! :)
This game was awesome and really scary!
Great game! I really enjoyed it. I got stuck in a doorway after a while but I was creeped out the whole time I was playing.
EPIC GAME
Oh, who's there? It's horrible
I play a lot of indie horror games, both long and short form and to date, this one has been the scariest with the story being one of the most intriguing. I look forward to the full release of this game!
Hey thanks a lot, appreciate your feedback :)
Una historia muy completa e interesante con los saltos en el tiempo, me ha gustado mucho. Saludos y espero la continuación.
Saludos! Gracias!
Really like it so far! Interesting plot, creepy af.
The Inception of Doors. Nice atmosphere and jump scares
A very scary game, had me at every scare, good job!
This game was a lot of fun, and also my first jump into serious horror on my channel! I congratulate the developers for creating something with so much atmosphere! Check out my playthrough!
Awesome game. 🤘 check out my channel and subscribe!